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sweetsake
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PostPosted: 06-06-2017 09:46 PM    Post subject: Reply with quote

ARASHI "I'll be there" my Impression of English

I'll be with you,you,you you for you,you I'll be there for you,you,you be
with you.

Some new Some old in a blender,Nobody needs a chaser anymore.
Numeric shown twice as feel it's the secret sign.

Everything's kinda Lazy,to nappin' needs Hazy,
You can stand and call somewhat's a Mystery world.

“Ta-Da!”Violators try to fix on the smile,but escorted or not depends who's cleared the cause?

Your heartbeat,eyes and your bodyheat,I thought find it!
so I spelled to “touching you”,but what I got was the real and The Darkness.

You've roses,candies,mimosa and the higher!
Nobody cares about who watches what,n then stacked narrow moment in that crazy days.

I am Excite. I will sink and rise again.If they want it, calling does not any make a sense.

You've roses, candies, mimosa and Just one.
can't touch it with my own hands, but I understand the existence.

I'll be with you,you,you you for you,you I'll be there for you,you, you be
with you.
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PostPosted: 06-07-2017 03:02 PM    Post subject: Reply with quote

That could be a Moby song.
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sweetsake
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PostPosted: 06-08-2017 07:02 AM    Post subject: Reply with quote

this honor is more than I deserve,but Thank you HaileyMcComet!
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love2travel
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PostPosted: 06-08-2017 01:26 PM    Post subject: Reply with quote

sweetsake wrote:
ARASHI "I'll be there" my Impression of English

I'll be with you,you,you you for you,you I'll be there for you,you,you be
with you.

Some new Some old in a blender,Nobody needs a chaser anymore.
Numeric shown twice as feel it's the secret sign.

Everything's kinda Lazy,to nappin' needs Hazy,
You can stand and call somewhat's a Mystery world.

“Ta-Da!”Violators try to fix on the smile,but escorted or not depends who's cleared the cause?

Your heartbeat,eyes and your bodyheat,I thought find it!
so I spelled to “touching you”,but what I got was the real and The Darkness.

You've roses,candies,mimosa and the higher!
Nobody cares about who watches what,n then stacked narrow moment in that crazy days.

I am Excite. I will sink and rise again.If they want it, calling does not any make a sense.

You've roses, candies, mimosa and Just one.
can't touch it with my own hands, but I understand the existence.

I'll be with you,you,you you for you,you I'll be there for you,you, you be
with you.
Sweetsake...This was very pleasing and enjoyable to read Very Happy

I look forward to reading more of your poems!!!
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PostPosted: 06-08-2017 04:24 PM    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you,love2travel.I'm also happy in being able to hear that you liked it!
I'll keep doing...Smile
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PostPosted: 06-15-2017 02:50 AM    Post subject: Reply with quote

sweetsake wrote:
Thank you,love2travel.I'm also happy in being able to hear that you liked it!
I'll keep doing...Smile
Very well then, I'll be keeping an eye out for your next poem then!
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PostPosted: 06-15-2017 09:33 PM    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for cheering me up Very Happy
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PostPosted: 06-16-2017 05:35 AM    Post subject: Reply with quote

sweetsake wrote:
Thanks for cheering me up Very Happy
Cool Have a Happy Day!
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PostPosted: 07-03-2017 03:22 PM    Post subject: Reply with quote

ARASHI "TU NA GU" my Impression of English


(hey! are you ready!? ...yeah.let's go.)

I don't wanna say that,but sort of boring everyday.After walking a-ay, around I hit the bu-tter-fly.

Why? It could be somewhat Sign,Once I decide it's Fate, I fall into a hole of contradiction.

I would like to know "the world only you and me".
I want to hold you tight,
And you'll be dressed innt,My Only Spandex Nude color
...and It looks good on you.

No matter how many times your heart shut to the darkness,Don't think you are alone.Oh never let you go.

I'll let you open your eyes. I'll kiss like a wind before you notice it.let me hear you day n night.Don't wanna let you go.

Somebody's shouting."This formula is dangerous" …But you should believe this "thing called love" .

I don't know where it is.so they makes fun of me, But I dream of reaching promised land.
...And I hope that be called 'REAL LOVE'.

Oneday Oneway Onetime you still waiting?
Oneday Oneway Onetime and may wasting.
Oneday Oneway Onetime…J S Y K
no sorry n excuse I do sh** how I want.

…oh I don't wanna let you go…ooh oh....

No matter how many times your heart shut to the darkness,Don't think you are alone.Oh never let you go.

I'll let you open your eyes. I'll kiss like a wind before you notice it.let me hear you day n night.Don't wanna let you go.

Somebody's shouting."This formula is dangerous" …But you should believe this "thing called love" .

I don't know where it is.so they makes fun of me, But I dream of reaching promised land.
And I hope that be called 'REAL LOVE'.
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PostPosted: 07-09-2017 08:34 AM    Post subject: Reply with quote

sweetsake wrote:
ARASHI "TU NA GU" my Impression of English


(hey! are you ready!? ...yeah.let's go.)

I don't wanna say that,but sort of boring everyday.After walking a-ay, around I hit the bu-tter-fly.

Why? It could be somewhat Sign,Once I decide it's Fate, I fall into a hole of contradiction.

I would like to know "the world only you and me".
I want to hold you tight,
And you'll be dressed innt,My Only Spandex Nude color
...and It looks good on you.

No matter how many times your heart shut to the darkness,Don't think you are alone.Oh never let you go.

I'll let you open your eyes. I'll kiss like a wind before you notice it.let me hear you day n night.Don't wanna let you go.

Somebody's shouting."This formula is dangerous" …But you should believe this "thing called love" .

I don't know where it is.so they makes fun of me, But I dream of reaching promised land.
...And I hope that be called 'REAL LOVE'.

Oneday Oneway Onetime you still waiting?
Oneday Oneway Onetime and may wasting.
Oneday Oneway Onetime…J S Y K
no sorry n excuse I do sh** how I want.

…oh I don't wanna let you go…ooh oh....

No matter how many times your heart shut to the darkness,Don't think you are alone.Oh never let you go.

I'll let you open your eyes. I'll kiss like a wind before you notice it.let me hear you day n night.Don't wanna let you go.

Somebody's shouting."This formula is dangerous" …But you should believe this "thing called love" .

I don't know where it is.so they makes fun of me, But I dream of reaching promised land.
And I hope that be called 'REAL LOVE'.
It's good to see you posting in this thread again...and I am enjoying reading your REAL LOVE poem, and the promised land! Very Happy
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PostPosted: 07-09-2017 01:15 PM    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you for the kind words for my tiny Word play.
My only hope is,my writing will become a stepping stone for somebodies to feel something and to think something.
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PostPosted: 07-11-2017 03:38 PM    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm assuming these were written in Japanese and then translated into English. Can you post both versions?
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sweetsake
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PostPosted: 07-12-2017 08:37 AM    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you for your interest,HaileyMcComet.
Because this is a problem related to copyright law, I avoid publishing in this place.
I send DM you.

Certainly these are based on Japanese pop songs, but they are not literal translation.
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PostPosted: 07-17-2017 02:00 PM    Post subject: Reply with quote

I thought these were translations of original songs/poems written by you. I didn't realize they were translations of a boy band's songs. Although, looking back, that makes sense.
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PostPosted: 07-17-2017 09:21 PM    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for your concern!
I will tell you just for their introduction,they are not boy bands,they are an Idol group project,consisting of five members(from Wikipedia).

and I define this as "my Impression of English" because it is too much too freely to call it translation.

and yes,they are accurately not original songs/poems written by me.Avoid doing further explanation.by the copyright issue.
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