Susy Songs 2012 * *I have added more **

herc:Well done sussy! now someone can make the folk melody

herc I've noticed you are the king of misspelling people names on here you always either misspell, or arrantly capitolize the first letter. like my name is categorically written 'kapoo'. unless people want to do KPU, which I also will respond to

anyway! enough about me and herc 'Sussy' love your lyrics! get yourself a tape recorder and sing it for us, would be great to hear the Susy pipes in full acoustic folk force! I totally have an idea for your lyrics btw, using a track I have. and just on first reading I think it would work! want me to take a stab at it sometime? except it will be more rocky than folky. is that an issue? excellent lyrics. :cool: do you play guitar? planning to post a rendition for us?

thanks so much, I have a melody for it. Wish y'all could hear it. Quite folky. That's cool you have a tune for it Kapoo I'll hear yours and get back to you, have to get back to work rite now.
have written some others the end of last year and this year, will post them here when get time

SusyLuvsPaul:thanks so much, I have a melody for it. Wish y'all could hear it. Quite folky. That's cool you have a tune for it Kapoo I'll hear yours and get back to you, have to get back to work rite now.
have written some others the end of last year and this year, will post them here when get time

Yes, good lyrics Susy. Cool to hear you're writing songs! anyway thats cool then, I'll just stand by for your version. but know that I'm waiting in the wings (no pun) on it. you say the word and you just might wind up with a kapoo version of your song :cool:

and look at you there all busy working for the (wo)man hey, get back to work will you!

BLUE STREET

Feels like I live on Blue Street
in a tenuous haze, lost in
the silvery fog of rainy daze
on the nothing I can do street
once I made you out in
the shadows there,
all the time knowing there
was not a hope or prayer
missing you is bittersweet
and I am lost on Blue Street
I meant little to you
so you see I can't help
but be so blue
will I ever find my way out of Blue Street,
now that I know for sure
you're gone to stay
--Susy 2012
this song is a bit bluesy and jazzy

This is my "Positively 4th Street"--a bitter protest ditty--but minus the Bob Dylan brilliance--from some months back, in 2011--thankfully the fussin' and feudin' has let up considerably since then (whew! relief!)--

Free Floatin' Ill Will

free floatin' ill will
imparts quite a shudder, and a chill
who's it gonna land on next,
and why is it so hard
to give an' get respect
they don't even know me!
--and I don't really know them,
yet sporadic cutting malice
makes me wish to escape, to
my long gone lamented
pink palace
I've beseeched please get off your broomsticks
I know you think I'm just a
silly dumb hick
and to me you're a sneeze in the breeze
such mysteries
I want this free floatin' ill will to cease
have you never heard of sisterhood
and its power to do good works,
let's please stop bein' such jerks
our free floatin' ill will when
it settles is quite a bitter pill--
where is some warmth to
ease our shared chill?
have they not heard of sisterhood
and its powers to do good,
I wish it would vanquish
all this free floatin' fast growin'
too often emoting ill will
--S. (for acoustic guitar, folky)

Really good lyrics Susy, I like Free Floatin Ill Will and Beyond the Pale! good poetry and you do some cool rhyme things in Free Floatin' :cool: nice