Wow. Drastic.
I have no quote unquote boyfriend (I had to write it out...it had to be read that way...)
Never have.
Don't really know (or care very much) as it stands if I ever do.
(Which may be a lie, but as far as you're concerned...well, your call...)
I am only 14, after all. -rolls eyes- I doubt any one of my classmates could explain what it is to be "in love". I roll my eyes so much at them, I'm startled that they aren't stuck that way...
Haaa.... are you making fun of my first poem CG?! 
It was pretty funny looking back... but I still like it since it was the first one.
Hey don't worry, your eyes won't get stuck... 
: Good Luck with your classes this week! 
I'm working on a poem about being in a car that turned into a rocket of sorts... I wonder how it will turn out
It'll turn out perfectly. It is /you/ writing this poem.
No, I'm not making fun of your poem.
I write poems like that about no one at all. -shrugs-
Hence why I am even more allowed to say "I haven't the slightest clue where it came from" because they just...pop up and you have to write them! They hardly are ever about anything...
Stop the train, I think I'm in love.
As I read your exquisite poem I thought of the coast line of kauai
I thought of the apple of mine eye
stay with me in circular motion and match my potion
standing without in the ocean
coming close to your lightness
and I pick you up
what luck
to find
my kind
and duck together through the worst kind of weather
where loved ones in fear call our names
the mighty waves (way)
the hill walk to higher ground
we get around
walking
sharing
loving
in kind
being loved by mine...
dreams....
And Amy Winehouse sings it right, for it seems that;
"love is a losing game"
Well Hawaii-Jason Luis Rivera ....thank you very much...that was quite a beautiful complement.... a poem and the comparison to the coast of Kauai for my poem!!! The most beautiful islands I have ever laid eyes on... I did cry when I left it both times 
I wish I could write in your style.... 
I went home intending to stay when suddenly on thanks giving, without a goodbye, my 14 monthe old and her mother left home her home to New Braunfels. Well I became, I would say, psychotically depressd and it is a secret place with waterfals, privacy, at the end of Kauai, near ke'e beach that brought me to life. I thought of that place. I spent as much time there as I could staying there alone for 9 months. I was 27 and it was when I began to write again.
(there I stood
before thanks giving
unbelieving
unrelenting grieving
rest in death feanding
finding peace within me grave)
((2.7 decades searched my unbound heart in vain))
Yes, I know Ke'e beach... I did some nice snorkeling in Kauai. I love the whole north shore and Makenna Point and the views of Mt. Waialeale and Hanalei Bay from Princeville, the views of the Napali coast from Poahali beach. No wonder they use that island for so many movies. 
Now I have to go to Tahiti and Fiji to see if it's even a better Paradise... Saw the east shore of Oahu and think it looks a bit like pics of Tahiti!
Christmas Carol
Joyous Song
A voice crystal clear
singing loud
a spirit that lifts
from the crowd
a beauty in life
that eliminates strife
Voices joined in chorus
The joy of the season
Merriment of the heart
Hymns will impart
Great wonder
Hot chocolate
Floating marshmalows
Whip cream on your nose
A fire, so warm
Spit and crackle
hot toes
Tree smells so nice
like Chrismas
Ahhhh
Ornaments, golden orbs
twinkle in the light
Presents, rainbow colors, awaiting
happy smiles
love2travel:Yes, I know Ke'e beach... I did some nice snorkeling in Kauai. I love the whole north shore and Makenna Point and the views of Mt. Waialeale and Hanalei Bay from Princeville, the views of the Napali coast from Poahali beach. No wonder they use that island for so many movies.
Christmas Carol
Joyous Song
A voice crystal clear
singing loud
a spirit that lifts
from the crowd
a beauty in life
that eliminates strife
Voices joined in chorus
The joy of the season
Merriment of the heart
Hymns will impart
Great wonderHot chocolate
Floating marshmalows
Whip cream on your nose
A fire, so warm
Spit and crackle
hot toesTree smells so nice
like Chrismas
Ahhhh
Ornaments, golden orbs
twinkle in the light
Presents, rainbow colors, awaiting
happy smiles
Ke'e is just one of many pristine and sacred grounds
where I believe Jesus very feet walked to view his most beautiful of his creations
with words ubsurd to the unhearing ear
claims confine the wisdom of my mide,
search this earth and
honestly
tell me of greater beauty.
I loved your Christmas carrol, love
Contemplation please
I'm scraping down on my knees
and losing
and bruising
and raising
the pull string
I'll lt bring it lower
loader
the sower who found a way.
Love2travel...beautiful carol. Everything you write is so stylistic!
Jason...writing is a good release. Sometimes I find stuff in me that I didn't know was there! And it always feels good to start writing again.
(And I enjoy reading it very much!)
(sorry for my english, i'm french 
)
Yesterday i had a dream,
A very special one : it was a beatles'dream,
Was there in England or in India?
Anyway it was the time of beatlemania,
John and Paul were close to me,
John slowly walking in front of me,
Long hair, moustache and beard,
The wind in his clothes, he seemed to fly like a bird,
Paul was twenty and not bearded,
I held him tight, my hand felt his heart beating, yes I did !
'Ello, missguitar.
That was beautiful.
Wish it were my dream!
Love seems simple from the eyes of the youth
must a broken heart be fixed by my hands.
Hi Crossover Genius... Wow stylistic... Thanks!!! Missing you over at the other thread... I really enjoy reading everyone's poems too!
Jason... I am enjoying your poems and style, very enjoyable... Thank you as well! I really look forward to seeing what everyone is writing...
Hi Miss Guitar.... Wow... quel magnifique rêve, non? Your English is great and I really enjoyed your poem... I hope you gave Paul a big hug in your dream I have had Beatle dreams for years... always wonderful 
Electric Butterfly
Electric butterfly scarf around your neck
Looking like you are going to take flight
Breaking free from gravity
Electrically charged
Shooting star magnetic ring
Rare earth magnets
Come together to form the ring
Star magnetic
thank you Crossover Genius and love2travel
i admit it's hard for me to write in english, so i'm very happy if u like it
i have another one :
This is the story of a woman,
She was fighting for her life while giving birth to a child,
The only thing that kept her alive,
Was thinking about the love she had,
Her mother said she was brave,
Her father said after all that, she didn't lose her smile,
It was because she had been saved,
She wanted to live while,
Her baby was waiting for her smile.
I stopped getting emails telling me when others reply!
ops:
I thought it had stagnated.
Loved the poem!! Very unique!
But, then again, I always love your poems.
And...missguitar...
Beautiful, yet again.
thank u so much crossover genius
you know it's so personal i've been hesitating before posting it
i'll try to write someting else for you
God gave Men a present,
The present's name was Earth,
But Men became violent,
And into flames Earth burst,
Our treasure is slowly dying,
Murdered by conscious madness,
Is it the time for mending,
For reacting to before darkness ?
Missguitar, I am starting to think you were kidding us!
You've a wonderful control over the English language. And a special gift for poetry.
ops: thank you
about kidding you, i wasn't at all ! it's just that i'm not always sure about the words, i often look in my dictionary
anyway, thank you for the compliment, i couldn't believe that you use the word "gift"
i really love english words and it's a kind of game and challenge for me to write poems...
One day I went to Liverpool,
Of course i was with my lover,
At that time we were young and fool,
But we always stuck together,
My memories play a trick on me,
Though as far as I remember,
It really was a place to be,
The Beatles' town made me wonder,
The beatles' museum was fantastic,
A white piano, a yellow submarine,
Alas I couldn't take a pic,
Could be a cause for a bed in !