The time I have
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The time I have I may or may not be here I may or may not be there I may or may not be everywhere But one thing for sure I am somewhere I could be old I could be young I could be middle aged But one thing for sure I am aging I live in an apartment I could live in a house I could live in a mansion Yet I do have a place to live The area I live has good people The area I live has bad people The area I live has inbetween people Yet look around there are all kinds of people I have a soul The neighbors have souls The other nations peoples have souls Take a look all the universe has souls I can love I can laugh\ I can feel Like the rest of the world I have emotions There are big animals in the world There are small animals in the world There are medium animals in the world Look around you find human animals in the world Does the world wonder who I am Does the world wonder who you are Does the world wonder who the other half are I guess the whole world has yet to know one another by Doris Ridge Mendlovitz
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Love it Doris....great job!
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Thanks love doris
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You write incredibly deep and introspective poetry, doris! Every one I've ever read as been amazing!!!
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Thank you love doris
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doris mendlovitz:
The time I have I may or may not be here I may or may not be there I may or may not be everywhere But one thing for sure I am somewhere I could be old I could be young I could be middle aged But one thing for sure I am aging I live in an apartment I could live in a house I could live in a mansion Yet I do have a place to live The area I live has good people The area I live has bad people The area I live has inbetween people Yet look around there are all kinds of people I have a soul The neighbors have souls The other nations peoples have souls Take a look all the universe has souls I can love I can laugh\ I can feel Like the rest of the world I have emotions There are big animals in the world There are small animals in the world There are medium animals in the world Look around you find human animals in the world Does the world wonder who I am Does the world wonder who you are Does the world wonder who the other half are I guess the whole world has yet to know one another by Doris Ridge Mendlovitz
This is great! I wonder if somebody could put music to it.
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I wish they could . Hint Hint love doris
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It's lovely, Doris!
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doris mendlovitz:
I wish they could . Hint Hint love doris
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audi:
doris mendlovitz:
I wish they could . Hint Hint love doris
What makes it tough (for me anyway) is that Doris' verses don't follow the same meter. I think it would take some serious finessing of the melody, or holding notes or something, to make it work. or just eliminate the verses that don't fit, keeping verses closest to the same meter. or you could just go to the old trusty method of chopping it all up and filling in your own melody with the bits
you should give it a run audi 
cool poem Doris. each verse twists the reader up in thought. in the sense that for me personally, after each verse basically, I stopped and thought about how each line relates to the next. good stuff. -
Thanks I hope I get some where with it. love doris
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kapoo:
audi:
doris mendlovitz:
I wish they could . Hint Hint love doris
What makes it tough (for me anyway) is that Doris' verses don't follow the same meter. I think it would take some serious finessing of the melody, or holding notes or something, to make it work. or just eliminate the verses that don't fit, keeping verses closest to the same meter. or you could just go to the old trusty method of chopping it all up and filling in your own melody with the bits
you should give it a run audi cool poem Doris. each verse twists the reader up in thought. in the sense that for me personally, after each verse basically, I stopped and thought about how each line relates to the next. good stuff.It can be done. I had to slightly re-phrase part SusyLuvsPaul's lyrics to "You've Got More Sass Than Class." BTW: Still having that technical issue, kapoo.
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ok . What technical issue? l0ve doris.
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doris mendlovitz:
ok . What technical issue? l0ve doris.
Long story. Regarding a recent break-up.
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audi:
doris mendlovitz:
ok . What technical issue? l0ve doris.
Long story. Regarding a recent break-up.
Radio Shack not able to solve the dilemma? damn I thought the were essentially supposed to be the adptor kings! those bastards!
I actually have an old useless guitar effects foot pedal, useless cause I lost the plug adaptor. I feel your pain. and yes you are in fact correct as far as Doris' song, could be done. are you thinking tender acoustic styles? -
kapoo:
audi:
doris mendlovitz:
ok . What technical issue? l0ve doris.
Long story. Regarding a recent break-up.
Radio Shack not able to solve the dilemma? damn I thought the were essentially supposed to be the adptor kings! those b**tard!
I actually have an old useless guitar effects foot pedal, useless cause I lost the plug adaptor. I feel your pain. and yes you are in fact correct as far as Doris' song, could be done. are you thinking tender acoustic styles?They, most likely, have what I need, but I need to bring in my equipment to test it at their store. At least, thistime, they were honest: Radio Shak is notorious for knowingly selling you sh-t you don't need.
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audi:
kapoo:
audi:
doris mendlovitz:
ok . What technical issue? l0ve doris.
Long story. Regarding a recent break-up.
Radio Shack not able to solve the dilemma? damn I thought the were essentially supposed to be the adptor kings! those b**tard!
I actually have an old useless guitar effects foot pedal, useless cause I lost the plug adaptor. I feel your pain. and yes you are in fact correct as far as Doris' song, could be done. are you thinking tender acoustic styles?They, most likely, have what I need, but I need to bring in my equipment to test it at their store. At least, thistime, they were honest: Radio Shak is notorious for knowingly selling you sh-t you don't need.
That cool, I know what you mean, they often have no clue in that place.. thats one chain I would have thought would have closed up shop a long time ago!
Thats alright, we have a Wings cover special coming up for everyone soon! not 'Coming Up'.. but its coming up -
kapoo:
audi:
kapoo:
audi:
doris mendlovitz:
ok . What technical issue? l0ve doris.
Long story. Regarding a recent break-up.
Radio Shack not able to solve the dilemma? damn I thought the were essentially supposed to be the adptor kings! those b**tard!
I actually have an old useless guitar effects foot pedal, useless cause I lost the plug adaptor. I feel your pain. and yes you are in fact correct as far as Doris' song, could be done. are you thinking tender acoustic styles?They, most likely, have what I need, but I need to bring in my equipment to test it at their store. At least, thistime, they were honest: Radio Shak is notorious for knowingly selling you sh-t you don't need.
That cool, I know what you mean, they often have no clue in that place.. thats one chain I would have thought would have closed up shop a long time ago!
Thats alright, we have a Wings cover special coming up for everyone soon! not 'Coming Up'.. but its coming up It's coming up very high, high, high.
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audi:
kapoo:
audi:
kapoo:
audi:
doris mendlovitz:
ok . What technical issue? l0ve doris.
Long story. Regarding a recent break-up.
Radio Shack not able to solve the dilemma? damn I thought the were essentially supposed to be the adptor kings! those b**tard!
I actually have an old useless guitar effects foot pedal, useless cause I lost the plug adaptor. I feel your pain. and yes you are in fact correct as far as Doris' song, could be done. are you thinking tender acoustic styles?They, most likely, have what I need, but I need to bring in my equipment to test it at their store. At least, thistime, they were honest: Radio Shak is notorious for knowingly selling you sh-t you don't need.
That cool, I know what you mean, they often have no clue in that place.. thats one chain I would have thought would have closed up shop a long time ago!
Thats alright, we have a Wings cover special coming up for everyone soon! not 'Coming Up'.. but its coming up It's coming up very high, high, high.
This excersize has caused me to realize something and why I love the song so much. the chords are basically identical to the Beach Boys' Surfin USA, or by extention Sweet Little Sixteen by Chuck Berry. but Paul has a new melody for it. its just a great rock arrangement. -
I hope it works out. I have an out of tune acoustic guitar I have yet to learn how to play. I got it at goodwill. love doris
