The time I have
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Well, friends, here's what I've done with Doris' heart-tugging poem, The Time I Have. I wrote a melody and chords that I thought best complimented her very emotive words. This is a rough mix, but it'll do for starters. THE TIME I HAVE (lyrics: Doris Mendlovitz / music: audi):
all instruments/vocals: audi (slightly re-worked the words) The time I have I may be here I may be there I may not be everywhere But one thing for sure I am somewhere I could be old I could be young I could be middle aged But one thing for sure I am aging I live in an apartment (no backing vocals) I could live in a house I could live in a mansion Yet I do have a place to live The area where I live (has good peo-ple-oh-oh-oh) The area where I live (has bad people-oh-oh-oh) Or inbetween people Yet look around, take a look around...there's are all... kinds of people (bridge) I can love I can laugh\ I can feel Like the rest of the world I have emotions I have a soul The neighbors have souls The other nations have souls, Take a look all the universe has a soul Does the world wonder (who I am) Does the world wonder (who you are) Now Does the world WONDER who the other half are Guess the whole world don't know each other by Doris Ridge Mendlovitz -
Audi, That was great! Now all you need is a manager to hawk it around to all the record companies and get you a recording contract! Where's Brian Epstein when you need him?!
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It's a flawed production, but I think this skeleton is the makings of a great track. Thanks, Nans.
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I like it too, very catchy.
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It's a flawed production, but I think this skeleton is the makings of a great track. Thanks, Nans.
It has a Great overall sound!!! ...very
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wow, I really love the music you set with Doris' poem. The lyrics are really deep too Doris...but you always write so well. I am really digging it Audi!
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Well, friends, here's what I've done with Doris' heart-tugging poem, The Time I Have. I wrote a melody and chords that I thought best complimented her very emotive words. This is a rough mix, but it'll do for starters. THE TIME I HAVE (lyrics: Doris Mendlovitz / music: audi):
all instruments/vocals: audi (slightly re-worked the words) The time I have I may be here I may be there I may not be everywhere But one thing for sure I am somewhere I could be old I could be young I could be middle aged But one thing for sure I am aging I live in an apartment (no backing vocals) I could live in a house I could live in a mansion Yet I do have a place to live The area where I live (has good peo-ple-oh-oh-oh) The area where I live (has bad people-oh-oh-oh) Or inbetween people Yet look around, take a look around...there's are all... kinds of people (bridge) I can love I can laugh\ I can feel Like the rest of the world I have emotions I have a soul The neighbors have souls The other nations have souls, Take a look all the universe has a soul Does the world wonder (who I am) Does the world wonder (who you are) Now Does the world WONDER who the other half are Guess the whole world don't know each other by Doris Ridge MendlovitzVERY well done auds, that was a great listen. I admire how creative you got with Doris's reflective poem, great phrasing, you carved out a nice appropriate melody there, good tasteful choices. you really seemed to sync up with the vibe Doris had in the piece of writing. And you're a very honest heart felt writer Doris, that I admire also. I am too, we have that in common. That was a worthwhile collaboration if you ask me, congrats on a nice co-write you two. Cool guitar sounds at the beginning
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I like it you sound like Elvis Castello love doris
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Why was it removed from You tube love doris