The time I have
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Well, friends, here's what I've done with Doris' heart-tugging poem, The Time I Have. I wrote a melody and chords that I thought best complimented her very emotive words. This is a rough mix, but it'll do for starters.
all instruments/vocals: audi (slightly re-worked the words) The time I have I may be here I may be there I may not be everywhere But one thing for sure I am somewhere I could be old I could be young I could be middle aged But one thing for sure I am aging I live in an apartment (no backing vocals) I could live in a house I could live in a mansion Yet I do have a place to live The area where I live (has good peo-ple-oh-oh-oh) The area where I live (has bad people-oh-oh-oh) Or inbetween people Yet look around, take a look around...there's are all... kinds of people (bridge) I can love I can laugh\ I can feel Like the rest of the world I have emotions I have a soul The neighbors have souls The other nations have souls, Take a look all the universe has a soul Does the world wonder (who I am) Does the world wonder (who you are) Now Does the world WONDER who the other half are Guess the whole world don't know each other by Doris Ridge MendlovitzTHE TIME I HAVE (lyrics: Doris Mendlovitz / music: audi):
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Audi, That was great! Now all you need is a manager to hawk it around to all the record companies and get you a recording contract! Where's Brian Epstein when you need him?!
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It's a flawed production, but I think this skeleton is the makings of a great track. Thanks, Nans.
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I like it too, very catchy.
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audi:
It's a flawed production, but I think this skeleton is the makings of a great track. Thanks, Nans.
It has a Great overall sound!!! ...very
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wow, I really love the music you set with Doris' poem.
The lyrics are really deep too Doris...but you always write so well.
I am really digging it Audi!
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audi:
Well, friends, here's what I've done with Doris' heart-tugging poem, The Time I Have. I wrote a melody and chords that I thought best complimented her very emotive words. This is a rough mix, but it'll do for starters.
all instruments/vocals: audi (slightly re-worked the words) The time I have I may be here I may be there I may not be everywhere But one thing for sure I am somewhere I could be old I could be young I could be middle aged But one thing for sure I am aging I live in an apartment (no backing vocals) I could live in a house I could live in a mansion Yet I do have a place to live The area where I live (has good peo-ple-oh-oh-oh) The area where I live (has bad people-oh-oh-oh) Or inbetween people Yet look around, take a look around...there's are all... kinds of people (bridge) I can love I can laugh\ I can feel Like the rest of the world I have emotions I have a soul The neighbors have souls The other nations have souls, Take a look all the universe has a soul Does the world wonder (who I am) Does the world wonder (who you are) Now Does the world WONDER who the other half are Guess the whole world don't know each other by Doris Ridge MendlovitzTHE TIME I HAVE (lyrics: Doris Mendlovitz / music: audi):
VERY well done auds, that was a great listen. I admire how creative you got with Doris's reflective poem, great phrasing, you carved out a nice appropriate melody there, good tasteful choices. you really seemed to sync up with the vibe Doris had in the piece of writing. And you're a very honest heart felt writer Doris, that I admire also. I am too, we have that in common. That was a worthwhile collaboration if you ask me, congrats on a nice co-write you two.
Cool guitar sounds at the beginning
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I like it you sound like Elvis Castello love doris
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Why was it removed from You tube love doris