HIS EYES : A poem
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HIS EYES: Blue is the innermost colour of the iris of his eyes, Encircled by a halo of soft green Encompassing the green Hazel/brown, In between sparkling, glitter-gold flecks Sprinkled all around. Those are the eyes that brought my Love down. Eyelashes flutter like butterflys at play Golden, long and lush Enough to make any girl blush Dream sweet dreams at night Wishing they were hers alone. Special colours indeed Changing in an instant, Great tidal waves of emotion, Challenging the power of the greatest oceans. Looking into those eyes There was only that perfect moment to me, Although what can I see? Believing Truth unspoken Blind to promises broken. The True Spirit of those eyes I have known With no disguise, In my heart I loved only one No surprise. If we could have only existed forever In that exquisite Paradise... Only I realise it was a dream My dream. Brought to life by me. And only me. It takes two to make a dream come true. So I let it be. But you will always have the most beautiful eyes, That I have ever seen.
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That was so beautiful Hey Kittay.... Eyes can be so much more than just eyes, can't they? They are truly the mirror to one's soul... I really enjoyed reading that one and will read it again
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a very touching poem kittay ty for posting
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thanks, the words just came to me. I didn't think about it at all. I believe that is when the best stuff can be created. Peace.
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as I colored onto my wall , in the shades of light I saw, and painted the vision of his Wife so I painted what I saw that day in the storming sea the ship was in an emergency being tossed about all I head was all of his shouts save me from the ruin of life! this she showed me, his loving wife so I reached in, and grabbed his hand( it was reaching to the heavens up above) from here in my distant land and gave him love to pull him thru anything he was going thru! I held him tight all through those Horrid nights and told him not to be dismayed for their would come a brighter day as he would see if he would just trust me to guide him thru the ruins of his life a Promise that I made that day to his loving Wife! so I gave him comfort and love that were sent by Angels up above to help him rise up from the ground to give him lyrics that has a healing sound to wrap around his arms that were weak to stand this little unknown, from a distant land! for all these yrs, I have dried his tears and help to make him shine again from me to you MY PAUL my friend I am here to be your silent friend!! so happy to see you smiling again!
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Hi Hey_kittay, sorry I've not been on the forum lately, but I've just read your poem and it's really beautiful.. you've got a real talent for poetry, I wish I had such a way with words..... best wishes, hope you're well, love Kevin.
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hey_kittay, That poem was beautiful. Looking forward to reading more poetry from you. You have a real talent as a poet.
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maccalindandme, Also, really enjoyed your poetry. We've got some very talented people here.
