I LOVE POEMS
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love2travel:
hey_kittay:
SurSteven:
The 3 Beauties her pulchritude? so lovely viewed a beauty to adore yet in her mind i see a kind of beauty even more common sense intelligence with learnings fit to boast while in her heart i see the part of beauty i love most her love for all an answered call then hopelessly i'm caught when that she chose to share of those the beauties that were sought
an amazing poem there SurSteven. Any girl would smile at that one.
Sur Steven...truly such a beautiful poem!!! Any girl would certainly smile at that one... So lovely!
Thank You Girls! I put my heart and mind into it!
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SurSteven:
love2travel:
hey_kittay:
SurSteven:
The 3 Beauties her pulchritude? so lovely viewed a beauty to adore yet in her mind i see a kind of beauty even more common sense intelligence with learnings fit to boast while in her heart i see the part of beauty i love most her love for all an answered call then hopelessly i'm caught when that she chose to share of those the beauties that were sought
an amazing poem there SurSteven. Any girl would smile at that one.
Sur Steven...truly such a beautiful poem!!! Any girl would certainly smile at that one... So lovely!
Thank You Girls! I put my heart and mind into it!
You can tell So nice when you do that!!
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Lonely Boys And Twirly Girls With magical love those lovely girls in colors twirl in colors twirl with graced and graceful symmetries they bring the watchers to their feet oh life complete oh life complete to have one of them share your seat oh lovely comely darling girl come skate around my empty world with people's hearts together hemmed we'll watch the woe of this world end and carry on the loving way with understanding now today oh future come oh future come bring us home and make us one fill my life my lonely fate with harmony and figure eights I was watching women's olympic skating one time...and it inspired this poem
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kapoo:
love2travel:
Digging through some old poems... this was a winter one... miss some of the people who used to write poems here... The Sound of Rain Across Watercolor Dreamscapes The sound of rain on the panes of glass The sound of your breath in and out As the dawn breaks, the fingers of sunlight Feel their ways around the shades, drawn so tight. The clock ticks out measured seconds The sound of the heat softly hissing Awaken from a dream, far away so it seemed I wanted to linger, in that world a bit longer The sound of the train in the distance A truck rattles by on the street Cocooned in my bed, with a song in my head It caresses me back into dreamland While fast asleep, with the world at my feet So far will I travel as the sights do unravel From Venice to Luxor in the blink of an eye It's like magic how I fly like a bird in the sky Every night as I slumber, in a world that's filled with wonder My dreams have no limits, my spirit flies free Every night a new surprise upon a magic carpet ride Through my imagination, a Lewis Carroll type creation
Yes, when I read this marvelous peice of writing, I read it and sort of rapped it in my head, and really eccenuated the beats you built into it, and wanted to let you know, it worked well its a good concoction of words, I like the descriptions of basically everyday life, hopeful. actually would make good song lyrics.
Hey kapoo... sorry for the late reply... I just saw this comment... Thank you so much Very nice of you to say that...
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Cool poem L2T...mindscape/dreamscape journeys are simply amazing at times!
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can I even express the sadness in my heart for familes torn apart a world thats such a mess the highs and lows the minute you have a blast there's cause to grow up fast like children innocent and froze in time and who am I what do I stand for? make sure you stand for something good I wish I could help and wish I could bring them back to life the little girls and boys who had no say in the matter who had so much to give forced to give it all so young their right to live how's it feel to forgive the unforgivable the only way to peace though and I simply can't express my sadness for lives that motherfucker took at Sandy Hook love your kids everyday really hard to comprehend the end.
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kapoo:
can I even express the sadness in my heart for familes torn apart a world thats such a mess the highs and lows the minute you have a blast there's cause to grow up fast like children innocent and froze in time and who am I what do I stand for? make sure you stand for something good I wish I could help and wish I could bring them back to life the little girls and boys who had no say in the matter who had so much to give forced to give it all so young their right to live how's it feel to forgive the unforgivable the only way to peace though and I simply can't express my sadness for lives that **** took at Sandy Hook love your kids everyday really hard to comprehend the end.
"I simply can't express ...." In a thread I wrote that I cannot find the right words .... I like that you captured your thoughts in the now .... (*Sad that it has to be because of Sandy Hook ....)
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(((((kapoo))))) incomprehensible overwhelming grief unforgivable
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In the honor of those kids... When I hear things like this it hurts, and writing can help a little. In this case it didn't help much but was a little release. It's a real wake up call. For me it's so oddly juxtaposed with the high I was feeling enjoying the music of the 121212 concert. Man this is a crazy world.
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kapoo:
hawaii-jason luis rivera:
Good stuff I like it. Reminiscent of Tupac/makaveli. I like how you gave love to all four of the Beatles you worked it in there. peace and love 3love
Makevelli in this? Illuminati? blows like a 12-gague shotty?
that song is nasty I?ve definitely listened to a ton of 2Pac so influence has possibly rubbed off! I could be so lucky. That guy went back n forth in his views all over the place in his career, and his life and work ended on such a hardcore note people sometimes forget what a sensitive writer he could be. I think Tupac Shakur loved poetryDudes was looking back in this thread and just wanted to give love to some of the most hardcore rappin, Pacs verses are so nasty, built to flow.
Makaveli in this... Killuminati all through your body The blow's like a twelve gauge shotty feel me! And God said he should send his one begotten son to lead the wild into the ways of the man Follow me eat my flesh flesh and my flesh Come with me Hail Mary nigga run quick see what do we have here now? do you wanna ride or die? La dadada, la la la la I ain't a killer but don't push me Revenge is like the sweetest joy next to getting pussy Picture paragraphs unloaded wise words being quoted peeped the weakness in the rap game and sewed it Bow down pray to God hoping that he's listening Seeing niggas coming for me for my diamonds when they glistening Now pay attention rest in peace father I'm a ghost in these killing fields Hail Mary catch me if I go let's go deep inside the solitary mind of a madman who screams in the dark evil lurks enemies see me flee activate my hate let it break to the flame set trip empty out my clip never stop to aim Some say the game is all corrupted fucked in this shit I'm Stuck niggas is lucky if we bust out this shit plus mama told me never stop until I bust a nut Fuck the world if they can't adjust It's just as well, Hail Mary Penitentiaries is packed with promise makers Never realize the precious time the bitch niggas is wasting Institutionalized I lived my life a product made to crumble we're too hardened for a smile we're too crazy to be humble we balling catch me father please cause I'm falling in the liquor store that's the Hennessee I hear ya calling can I get some more? Hail 'til I reach Hell, I ain't scared Mama checking in my bedroom, I ain't there I got a head with no screws in it what can I do One life to live but I got nothing to lose just me and you on a one way trip to prison selling drugs ee all wrapped up in this livin life as thugs to my homeboys in Clinton Max doing they bid raise hell to this real shit and feel this when they turn out the light I'll be there in the dark thuggin eternal through my heart now Hail Mary nigga Come with me Hail Mary nigga run quick see what do we have here now? do you wanna ride or die? La dadada, la la la la okaaaaaay 2Pac was a badass -
Kapoo that was so heart felt about the children in Sandy Hook Was going through some old poems of mine...this one was from beginnings and endings I think... so I didn't write the first line... GO WITH THE FLOW Gift of the spirit, life does bestow It is right there, just open the doe (door... I'm using my Southern accent today ) Go with the flow, Go with the soul Follow the path of the stars the Universe has laid out just for you To yourself you must be true For only then will you dance the dance of your Hearts Desire Walking through the woods Opening my senses, I can feel the connection The sound of the ages calls out to me In the call of a bird, the rush of the wind, Leaves that have fallen under my feet The beauty of life in front of my eyes In the blue skies above The waves crashing to shore All the world it looks to Love Shining down, from high above My heart it centers on who we become The greater truth lies in the warmth of the Sun For only in Loves higher vibration Can we all become one peaceful Nation Mighty companions join to evolve the world A greater awareness, no small feat to venture Much pain and hardship, it takes a strong shoulder Only those with keen minds can put it together Most powerful minds, lead an inspired life Heart centered greatness to lead from the strife Kindness and caring arise from their core Their selfless compassion is hard to ignore
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love2travel:
Kapoo that was so heart felt about the children in Sandy Hook
Yeah totally was, that made a really big impression on me, just the level of sadness being at a real high point.. the peom almost can make me cry. read your poem btw, love the last 3 verses. all are good but you know we all have our favorites
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love2travel:
Kapoo that was so heart felt about the children in Sandy Hook Was going through some old poems of mine...this one was from beginnings and endings I think... so I didn't write the first line... GO WITH THE FLOW Gift of the spirit, life does bestow It is right there, just open the doe (door... I'm using my Southern accent today ) Go with the flow, Go with the soul Follow the path of the stars the Universe has laid out just for you To yourself you must be true For only then will you dance the dance of your Hearts Desire Walking through the woods Opening my senses, I can feel the connection The sound of the ages calls out to me In the call of a bird, the rush of the wind, Leaves that have fallen under my feet The beauty of life in front of my eyes In the blue skies above The waves crashing to shore All the world it looks to Love Shining down, from high above My heart it centers on who we become The greater truth lies in the warmth of the Sun For only in Loves higher vibration Can we all become one peaceful Nation Mighty companions join to evolve the world A greater awareness, no small feat to venture Much pain and hardship, it takes a strong shoulder Only those with keen minds can put it together Most powerful minds, lead an inspired life Heart centered greatness to lead from the strife Kindness and caring arise from their core Their selfless compassion is hard to ignore
kapoo, your Sandy Hook poem is so beautiful and it made me feel those same emotions i felt the day I saw it on the news. love2travel: your poem made me feel like somehow I can keep going a bit longer, maybe it was the Southern accent.
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kapoo:
read your poem btw, love the last 3 verses. all are good but you know we all have our favorites
Thank you Kapoo... I like the last 3 too!
hey_kittay:
love2travel: your poem made me feel like somehow I can keep going a bit longer, maybe it was the Southern accent.
Thanks very much Hey_Kittay I'm feeling like I'm reaching that new Southern doe too...
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love2travel:
kapoo:
read your poem btw, love the last 3 verses. all are good but you know we all have our favorites
Thank you Kapoo... I like the last 3 too!
hey_kittay:
love2travel: your poem made me feel like somehow I can keep going a bit longer, maybe it was the Southern accent.
Thanks very much Hey_Kittay I'm feeling like I'm reaching that new Southern doe too...
Glad to hear that L2T.
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hey_kittay:
love2travel:
kapoo:
read your poem btw, love the last 3 verses. all are good but you know we all have our favorites
Thank you Kapoo... I like the last 3 too!
hey_kittay:
love2travel: your poem made me feel like somehow I can keep going a bit longer, maybe it was the Southern accent.
Thanks very much Hey_Kittay I'm feeling like I'm reaching that new Southern doe too...
Glad to hear that L2T.
Thanks so much Hey_Kittay
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man its a slow day whats it a snow day? how highs the growth rate? how spry?s your pro-state?
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Here's an old one I wrote about a story I read about a child dying. it was years ago now so I forget the story exactly, but the poem came out well. Crying For You How could they do that they had you and threw back your life before it had begun I?m crying for you boy I think of that new toy I?d give you if you were my son Where ever you are now I wish you could know how there?s people who love you so much just for a moment I?ll give you my soul let it rest and be soft to your touch I pray that you?re peaceful lay wrapped in a fleece full of comfort for you on this day the wind sings a song for you nothing that you could do how could they treat you that way? Next time I pick flowers or drip from rain showers I?ll think of you up in the sky and keep what you taught me the brilliance you brought me today cause you made me ask why So forever young soul you're free now I know so and if they don't know what they did then screw them it?s you boy let peace bring you true joy love always to you and the kids
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going through an old Word doc of poems, this ones cool. see my creativity is all dried up now, compared to where I was when I was writing like this. so fresh reading it tonight. don't it make your brown eyes blue? lol Back When I was 5 Who could believe in you if what you say isn't true? if he's deceiving me then what's he see for you? when they raise the flag who do I pledge allegiance to? lifes like my lunch in paper bags sometimes they?ll fall through best love I ever had was this world when it was new back in nineteen-seventy seven all the way to eighty-two things were heavenly around the town where I grew family love was the sound that I knew and ran home to don't it make your brown eyes blue? when somebody loves you just for you? with no competition testing you and all the world is impressing you
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I?m a type clown can?t turn the hype down it?s time to dance I got word play tres advanced always stuck in a trance all caught up in these rhythmic avalanches pounding down sounds like sandwiches I?m taking my chances and due to certain circumstances that I cannot control sometimes my flow lacks substance but still it?s lyrical gold feel the beat of a slick sleek rhyming freak feeling the beat overcomposed flows they blow in sheets with perfect traction like cleats tricking a rhyme treat and it?s such a good time when you rhyme a fine line and mine carry heat like sunshine there it goes droppin like hipping and a hopping and there ain?t no stopping repeated shots to your noggin bangin til the jaws are droppin