I LOVE POEMS
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Macsback:
kapoo:
Macsback:
superb man
a lot of pointless rhyming there I made a lot of drug references too in that, I don?t mean to offend and I don?t really love drugs that much or anything, was just trying to come up with stuff. :
pointless is good as people start putting there thinking caps on looking for messages which arent there
exactly, that is the cool thing about that kind of string of consciousness writing, there are no question subconscious things that happen in the thoughts. and then people make up their own stuff too I hope that flows for everyone. writing like that actually takes an intense 'being unfocused' for me. its like you have to really try to not try, its interesting. just letting thoughts mesh with sound and rhythm. love it.
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kapoo:
Macsback:
kapoo:
Macsback:
superb man
a lot of pointless rhyming there I made a lot of drug references too in that, I don?t mean to offend and I don?t really love drugs that much or anything, was just trying to come up with stuff. :
pointless is good as people start putting there thinking caps on looking for messages which arent there
exactly, that is the cool thing about that kind of string of consciousness writing, there are no question subconscious things that happen in the thoughts. and then people make up their own stuff too I hope that flows for everyone. writing like that actually takes an intense 'being unfocused' for me. its like you have to really try to not try, its interesting. just letting thoughts mesh with sound and rhythm. love it.
its good playing about with words, Lennon was one of the best at it
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kapoo:
love2travel:
kapoo:
I love poems obliterated homes I didn?t say domes like where Vikings play their home games tone waves in your ear hinding out like stow-aways throw aways yo hey flow for days or go away no way yes like its jumping up witty wear it cause its fitting hitting pretty tight and fearsome spitting in your ear drum splitting when the tears come beer rum alleviate me get a cup and here?s some we're done.
Kapoo I like this!! Didn't know you had it in you... great, would like to hear more...
You didn?t know I had it in me? haven?t shown my maddening glee! rhyming words and battling please! I?ve been turning heads with songs since I was 3! not really no bod E has ever given me hard earned mun Ez have never even given me a freaking thing but company and some honeys I?ve gotten many many honey?s instead of moneys in my bank accounts its funny dusty snowy bunnies keeping flows so sunny or they?ll shun me thinking I just suck like dummies making me so sick to tummies falling down and out like bum knees done with dealers down to bump keys spitting up the style of pipe dreams hoping dogs out there don?t bite me it?s a fog inside so light me cause I?m twisting joints I?m missing coins but I?ve got others stashed like heart attacks so **** it suck it up and write it oh so sad my man ignite it flip the script and rap all hard core hop up onboard slam the car door jam like hardcore bands and grab the wheel in hands and floor it bore it snore it wh**e it out for sure its pure and more or less without a point of view this s**t I spews abhorrent nothing else to you but stuff to ponder on deplore it find a fonder song by broads in thongs who store it toking longer bongs you know it and the trees we grow are not grown poorly joke words patchy sketchy rhymes adore it when it bleeds in perfect metered time like verbal leaves left falling off of trees inside my mind it beez so breezey thoughts that sway for days and carry on you know its easy like John Lennons song please please me er wait All you need is love! McCartney sings that sweetly yet discretely Ringo Starr create a beat and greet me in your lair of sin bacause its tough to rhyme George Harrison real neatly for fear of straight embarrassment and beatings
Good stuff I like it. Reminiscent of Tupac/makaveli. I like how you gave love to all four of the Beatles you worked it in there. peace and love 3love
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hawaii-jason luis rivera:
Good stuff I like it. Reminiscent of Tupac/makaveli. I like how you gave love to all four of the Beatles you worked it in there. peace and love 3love
Makevelli? Illuminati? blows like a 12-gague shotty?
that song is nasty I?ve definitely listened to a ton of 2Pac so influence has possibly rubbed off! I could be so lucky. That guy went back n forth in his views all over the place in his career, and his life and work ended on such a hardcore note people sometimes forget what a sensitive writer he could be. I think Tupac Shakur loved poetry -
I'm not ashamed to say Tupac helped bring out my own poetry, as the rose in the concrete. His heart, strong and golden, I'm behoden to him. Yes the lyrics can be quite profane. He did it that way and this gentle way as well.
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hawaii-jason luis rivera:
I'm not ashamed to say Tupac helped bring out my own poetry, as the rose in the concrete. His heart, strong and golden, I'm behoden to him. Yes the lyrics can be quite profane. He did it that way and this gentle way as well.
yeah Tupac was great, cool that you listen. I could recognize (or suspected) from day 1 since I read your poetry, that you had hip hop influence in your writing. or that you naturally had that flavor in your style. I dig I?ve got these things in life that are pulling me different ways lots of scenes of strife thoughts I?m mulling still to this day gets real mean and up tight gets you anted up whos to pay but sometimes it feels like my whole damn world can turn to words on a page (((it feels like))) this whole damn world gets tuned to words on this page (((you feel that?))) and when I read it I get looped out this way but its alright we all write we alright and its all tight and its all night and its real life wrapped up in rapping paper what kinds of poems do I write? you?ll have to ask me later are they succinct or contrite? do we need excavators? to haul off this bullshit you write no shite alright I?ll see you later
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here I stand, head in hand, playing in my mind I?m at work, arrived at 8 and here I?ll wait ?til 5 same old shXt just different day I watch the time tick by I think I?ll write and hope it might keep my mind occupied so I will write some wordy shite I hope some fun you?ll find you know I drank a lot last weekend and my brain?s still fried if you don?t like the things I type I?ll say at least I tried I?m bored but on my keyboard there more entertainment lies let's start by playing with the keys but please the B?s below the G you?ll see the E?s above the D and Z?s atop the big ALT Key and geez Louise don?t cause a racket P is on the left of brackets X C?s V and V C?s X and C gets caught up in the racket we shall find some fun in pun and punching buttons everyone heres hoping something or someone might have a laugh or come undone back now to Y ? U - O oops I owe you an I between that U - O no this recreation turned frustration through translation I may owe an X plaination for the many complications with this education thanks for being patient as we move in text migration across the nation of your keypad we mad typers in the rain but without wipers for the brain like babes in diapers just the same when on this hyperbole train choo choo
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kapoo:
here I stand, head in hand, playing in my mind I?m at work, arrived at 8 and here I?ll wait ?til 5 same old shXt just different day I watch the time tick by I think I?ll write and hope it might keep my mind occupied so I will write some wordy shite I hope some fun you?ll find you know I drank a lot last weekend and my brain?s still fried if you don?t like the things I type I?ll say at least I tried I?m bored but on my keyboard there more entertainment lies let's start by playing with the keys but please the B?s below the G you?ll see the E?s above the D and Z?s atop the big ALT Key and geez Louise don?t cause a racket P is on the left of brackets X C?s V and V C?s X and C gets caught up in the racket we shall find some fun in pun and punching buttons everyone heres hoping something or someone might have a laugh or come undone back now to Y ? U - O oops I owe you an I between that U - O no this recreation turned frustration through translation I may owe an X plaination for the many complications with this education thanks for being patient as we move in text migration across the nation of your keypad we mad typers in the rain but without wipers for the brain like babes in diapers just the same when on this hyperbole train choo choo
thats pretty nuts people. cannot believe I do things like that, such a dork. I need to stop all that freakin noize right now. I came to just paint you a framed picture stained blue. it may entertain you. the colors remain true. it's gray where the rains blew like haze from a dank tube. a daze go insane snooze away the next day too. a game that your brains choose to play but we?ll change rules. We?ll wade in a vague pool of ways not to say too much. Crank up the slang grooves away from mundane moods I shade in the flames rouge and color a quaint moon. now wait as the page spews sayings at a paced cruise. delays on the train. Whose been sailing these waves dudes? just wasting a tape loop. sounds waning away through the day as I aim to make language in plain hues. Aye and an Aye oooo just blame it for making you read stages of lame food for thought in the afternoon. thank you thank you, thats a shit load of rhymes on aye and an aye ooo for ya comin atchya.
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still carrying this baggage like damage that?s done it?d be to my advantage to bandage these open wounds if I?d manage to loosen nooses let views take another vantage point sandwiched between two clues like two newly discovered planets so sad that it has this bandit still streaming this conscious madness the baddest of all the gladdest bags maddest of all the hatters and saddest of manners flattered but who?s standing in the batters box? shattering noise this boy annoys pitchers switch hitting for you this inning and grinning winning swing strong with my toys of joy and I?m quick with my songs my ploy is to pass you this poi mahalo then swallow it down follow me round in my room I boom a new tune in full bloom and soon it may settle inside your mind let it meddle like inside mine I'll get tired of posting poems here shortly. but as of right now I'm still digging it good thread loves2travel!
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kapoo:
thats pretty nuts people. cannot believe I do things like that, such a dork. I need to stop all that freakin noize right now. I came to just paint you a framed picture stained blue. it may entertain you. the colors remain true. it's gray where the rains blew like haze from a dank tube. a daze go insane snooze away the next day too. a game that your brains choose to play but we?ll change rules. We?ll wade in a vague pool of ways not to say too much. Crank up the slang grooves away from mundane moods I shade in the flames rouge and color a quaint moon. now wait as the page spews sayings at a paced cruise. delays on the train. Whose been sailing these waves dudes? just wasting a tape loop. sounds waning away through the day as I aim to make language in plain hues. Aye and an Aye oooo just blame it for making you read stages of lame food for thought in the afternoon. thank you thank you, thats a s**t load of rhymes on aye and an aye ooo for ya comin atchya.
Kapoo I am amazed at your work!! I wish I could do something like this, it's really fantastic!! Hope you keep it up!! Loved aye and an aye ooo especially
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Thanks loves2travel! If you said that I had said "I had said my boy Isaac's dead" Isaac's friend, Ira Ryerson, eye surgeon from Ireland he might fly out then sometime between 5 and 10 he might even try guiding again naive open minds to remember times when lies Isaac had said had entered inside of their head and hide how his own's turning red from all of the pride turning dread from burning & murdering dead my boy Isaac, flirting in bed with Ryerson's girl whom he said he'd love till the day she was dead but he never made it instead incredible in bed of all places. btw I am doiminating the 25th page of this thread!! I'm going to keep it going, plan will be to stop at 26
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I'm enjoying reading this 25th page
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Macsback:
I'm enjoying reading this 25th page
read on my good man, 25th page domination continues blue mountains crystal water missiles falling down cloud fountains dripping with a mist that?s all around mind doused in images of bliss that you have found pronouncing diligently fill your head with sounds light bouncing skidding up and outward thru your eyes announcing natures here to take you when you die we found some majesty before we said goodbye denouncing every thing in life that makes us cry
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kapoo:
Macsback:
I'm enjoying reading this 25th page
read on my good man, 25th page domination continues blue mountains crystal water missiles falling down cloud fountains dripping with a mist that?s all around mind doused in images of bliss that you have found pronouncing diligently fill your head with sounds light bouncing skidding up and outward thru your eyes announcing natures here to take you when you die we found some majesty before we said goodbye denouncing every thing in life that makes us cry
your on the crest of a wave the now
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kapoo:
Macsback:
I'm enjoying reading this 25th page
read on my good man, 25th page domination continues blue mountains crystal water missiles falling down cloud fountains dripping with a mist that?s all around mind doused in images of bliss that you have found pronouncing diligently fill your head with sounds light bouncing skidding up and outward thru your eyes announcing natures here to take you when you die we found some majesty before we said goodbye denouncing every thing in life that makes us cry
Oh Kapoo I love this one, I don't think you should stop at all
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He fights for his life every night and he?s always so up tight that he might never find through that darkness there?s a light why do I pass him by really not cause I don?t care but there are tears to shed whenever he is near me and I fear for the day that I say what is waiting on the tip of my tongue when I?m done I might see my buddy run far away through the sun fade away no more fun so I pray that I?ll never see that day but I can?t stand here alone with my hand reaching out for you to hold here we go like before every time I try open up your soul you let go heaven knows that I?ll be just fine and say good bye but know I?m hurting so inside believe that I see you and me like the way you want me to and I knew we could be something even if we kept far apart in our hearts in the darkness we both knew we had each other one another like a mother me & you 26 the end.
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kapoo:
He fights for his life every night and he?s always so up tight that he might never find through that darkness there?s a light why do I pass him by really not cause I don?t care but there are tears to shed whenever he is near me and I fear for the day that I say what is waiting on the tip of my tongue when I?m done I might see my buddy run far away through the sun fade away no more fun so I pray that I?ll never see that day but I can?t stand here alone with my hand reaching out for you to hold here we go like before every time I try open up your soul you let go heaven knows that I?ll be just fine and say good bye but know I?m hurting so inside believe that I see you and me like the way you want me to and I knew we could be something even if we kept far apart in our hearts in the darkness we both knew we had each other one another like a mother me & you 26 the end.
Don't let go baby hold me tight, for I scatter suddenly I hope that which I gave you made a difference in your life. It's the healing of the heart. We have an enemy, I am a child of GOD. Though there are rules that must be followed; I have enemies. There are people that are haters of GOD and open to demonic influence. Demons know whats going on. They were there when the Passion of the Christ, was in the present tense. We have enemies. Many of those demons have chosen to go with satan therfore they lost thier right to eternal life. They are full of evil and thier desire is to keep every son of GOD, even the very elect, Jesus said from claiming the blood sacrifice , by believing Jesus is the savior of all mankink and that he indeed is the Messiah. I wear both a cruxificion, and a star of david around my neck. When I am alone in the streets, I am catholic. They have proper reverence to the mighty GOD. Proverbs says in the beggining of Solomans book said,"The fear of the LORD is the beginning of all wisdom". Personally I refuse to believe in a hell that is everlasting, for 2 points. Perhaps 3. The first is that GOD says what will become a reality. GOD will and cannot due to the fact that Got is perfect. Revelation says,"and death and hades will be thrown into gihenna." Having an eternal hell in this universe is against the nature of GOD. Well that's enough for now Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. 12 12 is the year of many good things. 3love hawaii-jason luis rivera
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hawaii-jason luis rivera:
Don't let go baby hold me tight, for I scatter suddenly ho that what I gave you made a difference in your life. It's the healin of the heart. We have an enemy, I am a child of GOD. Though there are rules that must be followed; I have enemies. There are people that are haters of GOD and open to demonic influence. Demons know whats going on. The were there when the Passion of the Christ, was in the present tense. We have enemis. Many of those demons has chosen to go with satan therfore the lost thier right to eternal life. They are full of evil and thier desire is to keep every son of GOD, even the very elect, Jesus said from claiming the blood sacrifice , by believing Jesus is the savior of all mankink and that he indeed is the Messiah. I wear both a cruxificion, and a star of david around my neck. When I am alone in the streets, I am catholic. They have proper reverence to the mighty GOD. Proverbs says in the beggining of Solomans book said,"The fear of the LORD is the beginning of all wisdom. Personally I refuse a hell that is everlasting, for 2 points. Perhaps 3. The first is that GOD says what will become a reality. GOD will and cannot due to the fact that Got is perfect. Revelation says,"and death and hades will be thrown into gihenna." Having an eternal hell in this universe is against the nature of GOD. Well that's enough for now Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. 12 12 is the year of many good things. 3love hawaii-jason luis rivera
thanks Hawaii, that was a really heartfelt poem. you got a religious overtone from it then? very interesting or are you just reacting to it in religious terms? btw I didnt just flow that, its one I wrote a while ago, just saw it, felt like posting it I like the 'like a mother' line at the end. the one about carrying baggage I wrote a long time ago also, just liked it, posted it I have so many I could completely bore you with!! that I've saved over the years. since computers were invented basically! or more since I discovered rap music. here's one I wrote a loong time ago, I'm a total tool but hey I'm open about it How do I begin when spinning a tale? I must first generate a wind for words to set sail in my mind somethin can always derail my attempt to find the yin before the yang gets stale I?ll prevail in the end pretend that there?s a gale there to send this boat afloat again if you surrender to it when the winds begin to swirl it?s like you hurl up the words from deep within commit to a verbal binge induced from herb & gin from back when we used to party in the day and now the zone that I?m in producing blurbs of words putting it down again and again onto the paper verbal vapors may taper off and splatter pin point precision on a mission take a listen a minute it?s free admission no dissin just simply dishin a vision no competition lets switch it up for a minute you take a pitch and I?ll hit it admit it our rhymes flow fresh free form water out of a spigot just rip it so tongues get twisted just spread it out on a triscuit just munch meanings down like biscuits then mix em up for the discotheques flip and fly out to ?frisco rap funky just like I?m Sisco fill pans with a can of Crisco start cooking up that and this but these rhymes that have just been laid are weapons grade I?m not afraid to admit it be careful cause they?re bound to blow when you spit it forget it this phonetical spectacles feckin over with but wasn?t it so much fun? happy now that its done. you like that 'feckin'.. just changed that keeping it current
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no one steal these rhymes either! I told you, I'm writting a children's book over here, relax, you're getting a sneak peak I'm talking to you McCartney. this shit better not show up on My Valentine. all sifting through your website for material although actually it would be awesome if you did, thank you sir. literally, Sir
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kapoo:
no one steal these rhymes either! I told you, I'm writting a children's book over here, relax, you're getting a sneak peak I'm talking to you McCartney. this s**t better not show up on My Valentine. all sifting through your website for material although actually it would be awesome if you did, thank you sir. literally, Sir