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    Just call it Diana'Style!

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    • Diana'S
      Diana'S last edited by

      HI ALL!!!! Here I am: Name ---------------- DIANA Profession------------ Journalist, singer, song writer Location-------------- Central Asia (far far away) Love------------------ PAUL and MUSIC I want to introduce to you my: Composed-sung-played-recorded-homemade MY OWN (very good ) SONGS and (awfully made ) VIDEO CLIPS!!! [Diana'Style and one more song on MySpace!](

      ]Diana'Style video on YouTube[/url] [url=http://www.myspace.com/diana.sditanova) Hope you'll like them

      [Listen to me on MySpace!](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LIqPbSklnik&feature=colike]Watch me on YouTube[/url] [url=http://www.myspace.com/diana.sditanova)
      View my thread

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      • ?
        A Former User last edited by

        I found both the songs and video quite good, keep up the good work

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        • kapoo
          kapoo last edited by

          I'm with Macsback, great beat on that song DianaStyle! Awesome first verse too, that?s really good, you flow! And I like the first line in the chorus, ?wherever I go wherever I go..? that?s cool and catchy. However you need to re-write the second verse, just my suggestion, cause its not up to the same high standard you set in the first one. Your firt verse is too good!! you need to improve the 2nd, or make the 1st worse something While I'm messing with your rad song, personally I?d also change the hook line to something else. ?Diana Style? is cool and I know its YOU! but it isn?t working for ME .. Overall though, props to you for kicking such a fantastic beat! That and your confident playful vocal sound makes the song. I like your style. 🆒 Don?t know why but the MySpace page wasn?t letting me play your other track, One And Only. But I?m totally intrigued. Will try again sometime. Peace!

          its like trying to catch the sun on the water..
          https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ka06CWHRYFI

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          • ?
            A Former User last edited by

            kapoo:

            I'm with Macsback, great beat on that song DianaStyle! Awesome first verse too, that?s really good, you flow! And I like the first line in the chorus, ?wherever I go wherever I go..? that?s cool and catchy. However you need to re-write the second verse, just my suggestion, cause its not up to the same high standard you set in the first one. Your firt verse is too good!! you need to improve the 2nd, or make the 1st worse something While I'm messing with your rad song, personally I?d also change the hook line to something else. ?Diana Style? is cool and I know its YOU! but it isn?t working for ME .. Overall though, props to you for kicking such a fantastic beat! That and your confident playful vocal sound makes the song. I like your style. 🆒 Don?t know why but the MySpace page wasn?t letting me play your other track, One And Only. But I?m totally intrigued. Will try again sometime. Peace!

            scroll down the page a bit Kapoo and you'll find another stream for the song, good comments btw

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            • illwobble
              illwobble last edited by

              Nice song and video, and I also agree with Kapoo's very good comments about the verses. It's tough to take advice on rewriting songs though, isn't it? Once you've gotten as far as even making a video you feel like it's finished and changing it is hard. Especially when you say "Just Call It Diana'Style" and Kapoo comes along and says "Just Call It Something Else"! Ouch!

              \-Jon

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              • kapoo
                kapoo last edited by

                illwobble:

                Nice song and video, and I also agree with Kapoo's very good comments about the verses. It's tough to take advice on rewriting songs though, isn't it? Once you've gotten as far as even making a video you feel like it's finished and changing it is hard. Especially when you say "Just Call It Diana'Style" and Kapoo comes along and says "Just Call It Something Else"! Ouch!

                Yeah sorry Diana, I meant no offense of course, your song sounds really great and I like it. I'm just trying to offer something in the way of ideas.. whatever, I'm a musical nerd and some might even say an idiot hell I even critic Macca and lord knows I've re-written the lyrics several times on nearly all my songs, so I don't make much of it. bottom line, thanks for letting us listen to your song, I enjoyed it

                its like trying to catch the sun on the water..
                https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ka06CWHRYFI

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                • illwobble
                  illwobble last edited by

                  This is a very catchy song, I have to say. I just heard it a couple of times last week and the main line of the chorus has been stuck in my head all week! Btw, Kapoo, you're very over-sensitive and apologetic. Are you sure you're not British?!

                  \-Jon

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                  • kapoo
                    kapoo last edited by

                    illwobble:

                    This is a very catchy song, I have to say. I just heard it a couple of times last week and the main line of the chorus has been stuck in my head all week! Btw, Kapoo, you're very over-sensitive and apologetic. Are you sure you're not British?!

                    Yeah no kidding I am, don?t know why I?m like that. Sorry for being that way! so you?re also saying I?d fit right in in your country? awesome I know myself and I know I talk out of my ass sometimes. Just covering in case I did it there I know you?re all good with opinions on music illwobs. I just never met Diana, want to make sure she doesn?t think I?m an A-hole I don?t know though, right now its about 50/50

                    its like trying to catch the sun on the water..
                    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ka06CWHRYFI

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