well, as a song lyrics asks to take a sad song and make it better - there is another one
/Imagine/ changes only
imagine path to heaven \ It is inside your heart
No hell around us \ Above us space and stars
Imagine all the people \ Living every day \ (As you?)
Imagine world in future \ What would you want to do ?
Nothing to kill or die for \ For words and wisdom too
Imagine all the people \ Living life in peace \ with you
imagine no obsessions \ i wonder if you can
Imagine love relations \ of woman and a man
imagine all the people \ sharing all the world \ with you
it will be hard to get it for people as original song, so the music and melody should stay the same at least for a start, then the next version. But for the first maybe you want to play a piano and Ringo - drums for this ? then someone else will play bass maybe.
Yes, maybe the text is not what you really want it to be, some changes prob ?
i'll go ride for the sun, while i got it outside.
there are many ways, basically it's about time and fame, i'd like to change logic and spread it for the people, make this logic complete.
play their verse the way they want, with some help maybe.
i think, for the people it's important to have a proof of concept, you know.
some plays with electronic, they can add pads or any sort of instrument. they got those big wired boxes with stuff and know how. maybe add one more verse ?